Indi Ink Writing Challenge: Kissing Eve..

So I  got myself in to the Indie Ink writing challenge and got myself a topic =). I was given a topic by Runaway Sentence  which was as follows;   "write a story containing the line, "Damn, I really wish I hadn't done that.""    So I took up the challenge and here is the entry  =) . Do know this is not a personal experience =) . Hope you like it, Cheers !!

The time was around 4:30 on a mild , hot Sunday afternoon. The weekend has been a boring one for me and I was trying my best to find a way to make it a little bit exciting and fun. I felt that nothing was going to happen  and my mind convinced me that I should sleep off the rest of the day so I can go fresh to work tomorrow. That is when I got a call from my friend Adam.

I met Adam at College . He was a guy who had plenty of ambitions and with a rich family background he had a lot of girls coming after him . I met him while working on an assignment and since then we have become very good friends. So he called me and said the following

Adam :  Charlie my man how are you doing today ? You got anything planned  for tonight ?

Me:  No Mate, Nothing at all ..its a shitty day and I am totally bored. Why did you ask ?

Adam:  That's Great to hear man, well you know what.. I have finally asked out Eve  and we are going out for a movie tonight. The movie is called "My Best Friend's Wedding" would you like to join us ?

At first when I heard the above statement I was stunned.  Eve was studying with us in college together and Adam and I both had a crush on her.  I was madly in love with Eve but since she was a girl who came from a rich family I didn't try to go after her.  But, I still had a crush on her.. I was in love with her..

So with all these feelings inside, when I heard that Adam was taking her out  I felt sad, So I took a moment and replied.

Me: Oh so you asked her out?  good for you man, errr I don't know if I should come  after all you guys should go alone and have a great time

But Adam insisted that I should come; so with his persistence not stopping and I being so badly in need of something to do, I finally decided to join him and Eve to go and watch the movie.

So I was at the theater  around half and hour early where then I saw Adam coming with Eve towards me.  Eve was Beautiful .. her eyes were like stars glowing in the evening sunshine..her smile was beautiful like a rose.. her hair was nicely combed and falling down beneath her shoulders.. in every sense she was a beautiful woman and my inner sense was keep on telling me that I should have asked her out during college where then she also showed me some interest.

Eve was surprised to see me at first , but then Adam told her that he invited me too.

"I heard Charlie was bored today, so I invited him for the movie with us,  Two Guys and a Girl .. That's Pretty Awesome eh ?" chuckled Adam before he went to collect the tickets.  Eve and I was just looking at each other but never whispered a word. My heart was beating like a drum.. with all the feelings locked in my heart, we went  inside. Eve sat between me and Adam and I laid back and stared at the screen as the movie started .
While the movie was rolling on , I saw Eve sitting next to me. We were in the beach .. watching the sunset together holding hands . She also didn't take her hand away and were watching on as the sun slowly went down the ocean.. she looked at me and I looked at  her... Our eyes were transfixed at each other as she smiled towards me.. my heart was beating faster that I ever knew.. I was sweating in a heap but my focus was on Eve as I kept gazing at her eyes .. admiring her beauty. Suddenly, she  leaned toward me.. and I knew she wanted me to kiss her..I took my time .. and then gently kissed her lips.. I felt I was in heaven.. I felt I was in my own dreamworld with my queen Eve beside me..

Suddenly , I heard a loud noise and  I felt a big pain ..I felt my chin was stung by a swam of bees.. I opened my eyes.. I realized what has happened.

There stood Adam.. with fire burning in his eyes and pumping like a pitbull..  and beside him was Eve with tears in her eyes.. Adam growled at me..

Adam :  What the Hell Man ? Who do you think you are ?  I take you out for a movie with us and what you do ? You kiss my Girlfriend ? Your are going to pay for this Charlie Green..  I thought you were my friend.. 

I realized what I have done.. I have kissed Eve while watching the movie and the whole beach story I witnessed was a dream.. I felt like "Damn, I really wish I hadn't done that."" but deep inside I felt I did the correct thing since It was a kiss given with feelings.. not a kiss given with lust , hatred or revenge.   

Adam didn't speak another word and took Eve by his hand and went away.. I slowly got up and walked out of the theater thinking about all that has happened during the past few hours. It was a bittersweet moment  and in the end a boring weekend turned out to be pretty eventful one.

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